20 Jun
2024
20 Jun
'24
9:58 a.m.
Folks,
My assessment of the two of these that I reviewed is that the content and general
formatting is very nice. They show a lot of thought and effort.
However, the number of capitalized words is unnecessary and very distracting (looks like
the CAPS LOCK got stuck here and there). I’d reserve caps for special terms and words to
which we want to bring particular attention. Alternatively, we could just capitalize
everything……….
I did proposed revisions on two of the four attachments (attached) which you can review,
assess, and comment on for what they are worth.
Don
Donald K. Garner
Cell: (310) 367-3092
Email:dgarnersemail@gmail.com
From: Patricia Luehrs <patluehrs2468(a)gmail.com>
Sent: Thursday, June 20, 2024 9:15 AM
To: Roy Wilson <unit559webmaster(a)gmail.com>om>; Unit 559 board discussion list
<Unit559board(a)bridgemojo.com>om>; adamwindbarron(a)gmail.com; thomasmlill8(a)gmail.com;
Paula Olivares <paula(a)pacbell.net>et>; Katherine Cresto <mysuki(a)att.net>et>; John
Coulombe <gemodaddyret(a)gmail.com>om>; Morris Jones <mojo(a)pasadenabridgeclub.com>
Subject: [Unit559board] Fwd: Re: Sectional director issue
Greetings! Please see the attached flyers for the upcoming sectional tourney. Please
post as is appropriate.
Thanks to Kathy Cresto for her great job on the flyers.
Best to you!
Pat Luehrs
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From: Katherine Cresto <mysuki(a)att.net <mailto:mysuki@att.net> >
Date: Wed, Jun 19, 2024 at 6:54 AM
Subject: Re: [Unit559board] Re: Sectional director issue
To: Patricia Luehrs <patluehrs2468(a)gmail.com <mailto:patluehrs2468@gmail.com>
>, Morris Jones <mojo(a)pasadenabridgeclub.com
<mailto:mojo@pasadenabridgeclub.com> >
Attached, Please find the updated Sectional Flyers.
Pat, Please follow up with Roy.
Kathy
On Tuesday, June 18, 2024 at 04:59:12 PM PDT, Morris Jones <mojo(a)pasadenabridgeclub.com
<mailto:mojo@pasadenabridgeclub.com> > wrote:
Tournament assistants: Paula Olivares, Morris Jones
On 6/18/24 4:57 PM, mysuki wrote:
Let me know how to incorporate Paula so I can send it to Pat for further work I think
anytime would be fine to send it out.
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Morris "Mojo" Jones
mojo(a)PasadenaBridgeClub.com <mailto:mojo@PasadenaBridgeClub.com>
https://PasadenaBridgeClub.com
<https://pasadenabridgeclub.com/>
