Folks,

My assessment of the two of these that I reviewed is that the content and general formatting is very nice.  They show a lot of thought and effort.

However, the number of capitalized words is unnecessary and very distracting (looks like the CAPS LOCK got stuck here and there).  I’d reserve caps for special terms and words to which we want to bring particular attention.  Alternatively, we could just capitalize everything……….

I did proposed revisions on two of the four attachments (attached) which you can review, assess, and comment on for what they are worth.

 

Don

 

Donald K. Garner

Cell: (310) 367-3092

Email:dgarnersemail@gmail.com

 

From: Patricia Luehrs <patluehrs2468@gmail.com>
Sent: Thursday, June 20, 2024 9:15 AM
To: Roy Wilson <unit559webmaster@gmail.com>; Unit 559 board discussion list <Unit559board@bridgemojo.com>; adamwindbarron@gmail.com; thomasmlill8@gmail.com; Paula Olivares <paula@pacbell.net>; Katherine Cresto <mysuki@att.net>; John Coulombe <gemodaddyret@gmail.com>; Morris Jones <mojo@pasadenabridgeclub.com>
Subject: [Unit559board] Fwd: Re: Sectional director issue

 

Greetings!  Please see the attached flyers for the upcoming sectional tourney.  Please post as is appropriate.

Thanks to Kathy Cresto for her great job on the flyers.

Best to you!

Pat Luehrs

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From: Katherine Cresto <mysuki@att.net>
Date: Wed, Jun 19, 2024 at 6:54 AM
Subject: Re: [Unit559board] Re: Sectional director issue
To: Patricia Luehrs <patluehrs2468@gmail.com>, Morris Jones <mojo@pasadenabridgeclub.com>

 

Attached, Please find the updated Sectional Flyers.

 

Pat,  Please follow up with Roy.

 

Kathy

On Tuesday, June 18, 2024 at 04:59:12 PM PDT, Morris Jones <mojo@pasadenabridgeclub.com> wrote:

 

 

Tournament assistants: Paula Olivares, Morris Jones

On 6/18/24 4:57 PM, mysuki wrote:

Let me know how to incorporate Paula so I can send it to Pat for further work I think anytime would be fine to send it out.

 

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